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If I'm Still Bleeding,I'm One Of The Lucky Ones by BipolarWolfy

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Wow. I just gotta say that this artwork really caught my eye. The shading is amazing, the facial construction seems pretty spot on, and the body posture really shows a reflection of what the face portrays, which to me seems to be defiance. The blood spatters are good, though for some of the bigger ones, perchance a slightly darker line near the middle, to kinda show the origin of the blood, like the cut...>.< if that makes sense. The blood itself looks pretty nifty. I'm assuming the cuts are new. Overall this is a wonderful piece, I really enjoy it. ^+^? I'm not the best at critique though because I always feel like I go too far and offend people. >.< Anyway, this is really good work, and I really liked it. I liked the message as well. ^+^?
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BipolarWolfy Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013
Yes thank u i will work on the blood,this was a first for me lol,thank u for the tip,and dont worry about it! im alright with critisim when it comes to my work >w<
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LeonaGheringer Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
^+^? I was also going to say that if you wanted it to be more realistic, the outer edges of the blood patches could be more brownish, to give the impression that they are drying into scabs. ^+^?
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BipolarWolfy Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013
Tank u for the tip,i will try that next time >w<
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LeonaGheringer Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
^+^? np~ ^+^? I wasn't sure that was what you were going for though which is why I didn't mention it.
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BipolarWolfy Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013
well i can get any advice as possible
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LeonaGheringer Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
^+^? Alright~ ^+^?
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